Koo Too – Prologue
Writing and artwork by Brock Rizy.
Continue to part 001.
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Emily Edison created by David Hopkins, developed by David Hopkins and Brock Rizy. Koo created by Brock Rizy, developed by David Hopkins and Brock Rizy. Mail boy created by … actually, it doesn’t matter. You probably won’t see him again. Brock Rizy.
©David Hopkins and Brock Rizy 2009, in case you hadn’t figured it out yet.
Mail Boy, HA!!!
Those 2 girls are always fighting. Love the story so far, except for waiting for the conclusion. I want so much more.
Teenagers and their raging hormones. There will be many more parts to this story, 스티ë¸. Or, five. Maybe Mail Boy will make a surprise return.
Ok, I think the pages flow much better with the slight edits. Actually, much, much better.
Love the comic. And I love seeing a rival to the hero Emily always getting the best of her. And it does feel like that they sisters that love each other…in that special sister way.
Rockin’ !!! Great stuff man!
Great work! I believe this is not only Emily’s first kiss, but also her first thought balloon.
Yes, 스티ë¸, they are even more sisterly than the sisters on “Sister, Sister.” Who was your favorite? Tia or Tamera? I can’t ever pick.
Hoppy, I was hoping you wouldn’t notice the thought balloon. Just pretend you didn’t see it.
Thanks for the kind words, fellas.
Because we all know teenagers don’t ever think.
Hey! That’s Emily’s target audience, so of course I can’t agree with that. Actually, I think showing a thought balloon just goes against one of the rules David and I (or maybe just David) established before we made the first book.
Haha. I read the script. You thought I wouldn’t notice. :) I’m not anti-thought balloon. I’d actually like to see a John Edison thought balloon. That would be a scary place: math equations everywhere with words trying to surface for air.
Oh, geez. Building math equations in illustrator sounds awful. We’re going to have to talk that one over.
Brock, I know there are some freeish Math Equations software that makes writing Equations easier…you just have to find them. Then just copy past and tweak in Illustrator. Shouldn’t be too hard.
Thanks for the suggestion, 스티ë¸, but I’ve worked with math type in Illustrator before. It’s a nightmare, if you want to be accurate. It’s easier to piece equations together bit by bit, which would still be tedious.
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